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This old dog likely can't learn anything page-wise beyond sit/heel/roll over but would happily provide kale for essays like the ones so far. Crisp, insightful.

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Lucy this - and all of these essays so far - are so wise and brilliant: thank you. I am also an adherent of the jukebox method and will enjoy thinking of it as that!

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I’m relatively new to Substack, but somehow found you not long ago. Your essay this morning rang so true for me. When I have a deadline or some thing in me that wants to be written, I sometimes cannot find the rhythm. I never thought of it as rhythm, but that’s it. To help ease this birthing I have reached for my favorite authors or read my previous work. This is so helpful. Thank you for making me more conscious of it!

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Queen

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Lucy, what do you think of Robert Benchley and other writers of that era and time? I ask because I get a lot out of Benchley, and I'm aware that he had to write knowing that there is/was a deadline of some sort. James Thurber as well, and Dorothy Parker's criticism - the rhythm and voice are so significant in their work.

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There’s one Benchley piece I think about often, where he takes a walk in his home town and points out where the Trojan War happened and where the Bastille stood and where Juliet’s balcony was--all the places where he’d set stories as he read them. I’m not so much into the Algonquins in general, too clubby and self-promoting for me.

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I’m really enjoying these, Lucy.

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This is so good, and has me thinking about oral storytelling as well, where the rhythm holds the crowd.

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I wondered why I "keep having to read from the top, over and over..." Now I know! Thanks. I'll keep reading! I can handle providing some kale.

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So fun and on point. Made me flash on a weird moment during an interview I did with Aaron Sorkin. I was pushing him to talk about the Broadway libretto roots to his TV and film dialogue and said two lines of Music Man's avant-la-lettre rap song "Ya Got Trouble." He joined in and the two of us auctioneered the rest of the entire first verse, in unison, over the phone. Followed by a long awkward silence.

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Fuckin' A.J Liebling! I was wandering around Greece 35 years ago and spotted a couple I knew from my college dorm in a public square. I was so glad to see such familiar faces I borrowed Liebling's book of war correspondence from them and read his essay on Christmas ceasefires (with the now-gutwrenching-to-me subtext of white men recognizing each other as civilized). I haven't even seen Liebling *mentioned* in 35 years and his music comes rushing into my head. That's a motherfucking rhythm.

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Also yes take some money please.

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Oh my goodness, thank you!

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Happy to exchange my kale for your essays

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